I've decided to post excerpts from my NaNo novel (for which I still have no title... BLARGH!!) in order, starting at the beginning. You have, of course, come across my opening, and your advice and encouragement has been so helpful. If you want to catch up, go to this post to read the beginning . This excerpt happens directly after my previous NaNo Update , and it's a flashback. I'm sure you'd figure that out, but just in case... :) It's a rough draft, but I feel like I get my point across. It's mostly met to establish the relationship between Natalie and her father. Once again, any thoughts you have would be greatly appreciated. * * * "You're leaving for Vismuth in a month, so start making preparations." Official Hansley said casually. "I'm sorry?" Natalie said, hoping that she had misheard him. Her father sighed. "A shuttle is leaving for the Vismuth settlement in a month, and I have made arrangements for y